My mom, Jamie Beaver, is my hero. Without her I don't know how I would act. She teaches me how to be good person, and that a job worth doing is worth doing well. She tells me that if I want something, I have to work for it. When she bought me a phone, I had to clean the house for a week straight, it was worth it though. When she's upset she doesn't show it. She always puts other people before herself.
My mom isn't only my mom, but she's also my best friend. When I need someone to talk to, she's always there. She does a good job of putting me in beast mode before a game, and getting me motivated to do something that I don't feel like doing. She's honestly one of the nicest people I've ever met. Whenever I need someone to talk to, my mom is always there for me. She makes sure that I'm getting good grades. She's a single parent, and tries really hard to keep my brother and I healthy. She's one of the best moms you could ask for.
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Mr. B
9/25/2016 06:06:03 pm
Kailee, it sounds like you have a special relationship with your mom and that is great! You need to continue to work on elaborating within your paragraph and starting with a topic sentence.
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